From the sewers of Paris to polished complex sentences

 

TASK ONE:

Nineteen rings and three sets of earrings were dug up from a drain.

The drain was at a house.

The house is in a suburb.

The suburb is called Seine-Saint-Denis.

The suburb is a working-class area.

One of the pairs of earrings has a value of £14m.

All of this information comes from the police.

CREATE A COMPLEX SENTENCE (aim for 31 words)

TASK TWO:

Nine people were charged over the robbery.

The house belonged to a person.

The person was one of the robbers.

CREATE A COMPLEX SENTENCE (aim for 13 words)

TASK THREE:

The Harry Winston boutique is on a street

The street is off the Champs-Elysées Avenue

The Champs-Elysees Avenue is dotted with fashion houses.

The Champs-Elysees Avenue is dotted with cafes.

CREATE A COMPLEX SENTENCE (aim for 20 words)

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Complex sentence exploration : relative clauses

All of the following sentences were given to me as examples of relative clauses.  Leave a comment if you think any of them DO NOT contain a relative clause:

1. The importance of information technology (IT), especially of the World Wide Web, in tourism has increased tremendously over the past years.
2. The former wanted the convention amended to oblige states to submit nomination lists containing candidates from both sexes.
3. Each Convention Party nominates three candidates, whom it considers satisfy the criteria for office laid down by Article 21 of the Convention.
4. What is new is the accelerating speed with which it occurs and the growing outreach of its implications.
5. The information from the contracting parties disclosed that only three had legislation requiring egalitarian representation of both sexes in their highest courts.
6. Each Convention Party nominates three candidates, whom it considers satisfy the criteria for office laid down by Article 21 of the Convention.
7. They are only true about the teachers I have interviewed and the high school classes I have observed.

Complex sentence exploration : miscellaneous

Students found some interesting complex sentences in their reading.  Some were difficult to categorise, and some were just plain difficult.  Read the 5 examples below, and leave a comment telling me a) what types of complex structure you find in each sentence, and b) if you think any of these sentences are particularly difficult to understand.

1. Nowhere in the convention is it stipulated that one candidate belonging to the sex which is under-represented in the court must feature in the list.
2. Several protestors, former Conservative voters, declared themselves as having been “pushed to the left” by their experiences.
3. Others mentioned the issue of live exports as only one of the reasons why they felt they had to be there.
4. Foreign language educationalists and cultural linguists believe that foreign language learning cannot occur properly unless the socio-cultural aspect of the foreign language is learnt simultaneously because the mere acquisition of linguistic competence is not enough.
5. This study also hypothesizes that raising high school EFL teachers’ awareness of the autonomous and ideological concepts of communicative competence is likely to help them see their teaching activities lean towards the autonomous model of communicative competence.

Complex sentence exploration : wh- noun clauses

I'm finding it hard to forget Hakan's "it's a mystery; why?", but in class we produced some good examples of wh- noun clauses like "It's a mystery why nobody likes English food" and "Everybody knows who won the women's world cup this year".  Look at the following examples students found in their reading texts, and leave a comment if you think any are NOT good examples of wh- noun clauses:

1. Most of the problems organizations face today when designing and implementing online strategies stem from trying to fit everything into existing structures and models.
2. The assembly decides to investigate at national and European level what obstacles currently exist to the nomination of women candidates, what measures could be taken to encourage female applicants, and to consider setting targets for achieving greater gender equality in the composition of the court.
3. Empirical data on how these camps affect…
4. The primary issue for the Grand Chamber was whether the questions posed were within its Advisory Opinion jurisdiction
5. The participants were male and non-native speakers of English, two of whom had a BA degree and one had an MA degree in TEFL.

Complex sentence exploration : To

In class, we looked at sentences like "I came here to study" and "Shatha came to the UK to perfect her English" as examples of infinitive clauses.  "To study" and "to perfect her English" explain the purpose of the main clause of the sentence.  My students found lots of examples in their reading, but not all of them are quite the same.  Have a look at the following examples I was sent:

1. Organizations continue to broadcast information instead of letting the consumer interact with the Web site content.
2. Online advertising offers the opportunity to precisely target an audience to deliver advertisements that are customized to the user’s particular interest and taste.
3. Nominees to the full-time court are asked to submit standardized CVs and be interviewed by members of a sub-committee of the parliamentary assembly.
4. A key element of the resolution was the Parliamentary Assembly’s desire to increase the proportion of female judges on the court.
5. The protestors should join us in attempting to persuade other European publics and governments to abandon these cruel practices.

I think that sentence 2 is a very different example to all the others.  Can you see why?  Please post your suggestions below as comments.

Complex sentence exploration : a challenge

Canan found this sentence in the article she read for her presessional project:


In 2004, the Grand Chamber held that a request for an Advisory Opinion concerning the status of the complaints system set up by members of the Commonwealth of Independent States, following the collapse of the former USSR, to which some parties to the ECHR belong, fell outside the Court's jurisdiction.

I count 50 words in there.  Can you find a longer, more complex sentence than this?  Please copy and paste it as a comment...