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Exemplification : A Hot Potatoes Quiz

Click here for an ugly-looking Hot Potatoes Quiz I made as a form of feedback on student writing.

Noun phrase construction

Another email exchange to share:

STUDENT QUESTION

this sentence:

Due to the increasingly (adj) globalised (v) business (n) environment (n)....

Why? do you understand my question?

If I want to express the same meaning, I will write like this:

Due to the increasingly global business-environment...

MY RESPONSE

Actually your version is OK. The hyphen between business and environment isn't necessary, but the difference between GLOBAL and GLOBALISED is just that the latter (GLOBALISED) suggests that forces have MADE the world global.

Your analysis of the phrase from the text isn't quite right though:

Due to the increasingly (adv) globalised (adj) business (adj) environment (n)....

We could argue about whether business is an adjective or noun here and it doesn't really matter either way, but GLOBALISED is definitely not a verb. A lot of adjectives in English are formed from the active or passive form of a verb. To me, this is quite useful because it helps you understand their meaning (i.e. whether they are active or passive). Examples include bored, boring, interested, interesting, satisfied, satisfying, and I'm sure you could add hundreds more to my list!

A question about commas

I just thought I'd share this recent email exchange:

Student question

I have a question about "if" and commas.

What is the differet between this two sentences.

1 I would get married, if I were you.

2 I would get married if I were you.

My response:

The comma does make a slight difference. A comma tells a reader to pause, and it separates out parts of a sentence.

Sentence number 1 encourages the reader to stress IF. Stressing IF makes what follows seem less likely, or in this case, emphasises the fact that "I am not you".

There are other occasions when commas will make a much bigger difference to meaning. Can you see a difference between these two sentences:

1. I like student who email me questions about grammar.

2. I like students, who email me questions about grammar.