The problems in the following examples relate to your choice of either the passive or active voice for your verb phrases. Can you identify the problems and suggest corrections as comments below?
1. The Olympic Games with its long history has always been attracted by people as an entertaining and social event
2. 44,000 women diagnosed with breast cancer annually in the UK
3. Protein foods are advised to be included in your breakfast since it provides sustained energy and takes longer to digest
4. Skipping breakfast become an issue to be widely discussed
5. missions are always taken place in the most difficult situations.
6. it is not justified for the government to provide more funding for dementia
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