Speaking Class Task Text

As a mini group project, PS Class 1 were set the task of adding grammar to the following text:


I sympathize most with boy, because I can imagine do same things he do if I be his situation.  other words, if I have girlfriend who sleep with another man  £500, I find it impossible forgive her.  I feel sorry her, though.  She do what she do for right reasons, but I think if she truly love her boyfriend, she know how much her action upset him.  I no can make up my mind about friend.  If my friends know something important my relationships then I want them tell me.  However, if friend keep quiet, boy and girl no split up and they still be happy now.  Also, if I be friend, I no think I be able to tell boy what really happen.  I consider boatman and rich man be quite similar because they both take advantage girl’s situation.  I no can sympathize rich man because I never ask woman sleep me in exchange money.  boatman no seem so bad because “he only do his job” and if he take girl other island for free, then everyone else expect same treatment and his business collapse.  However, he no show any compassion and only see her situation in financial terms, so I no can respect him.